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PostSubject: A Broken Oath (A Fanfiction)   Sun Oct 07, 2012 11:59 pm

Chapter One


The silence of the night was broken by the sounds of sneakers thudding against the ground. The moon lit up the area with a soft glow, assisting the stars in illuminating the city.

A girl stepped out of the shadows of the buildings that loomed over the pavement eerily. Her black hair was combined with sideswept bangs, falling to the middle of her back. She had piercing eyes a mix of blue and gray, flecked with darker shades of the same color. Her skin had been tanned by the sun, a tattoo of Ancient Greek writing inked on her forearm.

The girl seemed to be waiting for somebody. Her great worry was shown on her oval face. The moon made her tanned skin look deathly pale as she threw herself into the soft glow. She looked around, rubbing the goosebumps rising on her arms.

“Hello?” the girl called. Her voice reminded one about water gently lapping at the edge of the beach, licking the golden sand with a foamy tongue.

The girl wrapped her fingers around a few strands of brown hair, fumbling as she twirled them together with numb, clumsy fingers. Her black hair was consumed by the night, blending in as a part of the darkness.

Suddenly, more footsteps thudded against a pavement. “So,” a voice snarled. “This is the famous Cordelia, demigod daughter of Poseidon? Yes, we shall see how Poseidon likes it when we eat you for breakfast!”

The girl, who was no more than thirteen, stared at the owner of the voice: a huge, humanoid figure who looked like it could lift a bus. Her red lips parted, but a tiny squeak was all that came out.

The monster laughed, a rumbling, horrible laugh.

Cordelia’s left hand flew to her pocket instinctively; her fingers closed around a ring. Her fingers squeezed the materiel and suddenly, a double-edged sword appeared in her right hand. It appeared to be made of bronze; Ancient Greek writing was etched on the blade.

The monster, a Cyclops, snarled in fear and made to crush Cordelia with one of his fists. Cordelia swung the sword and sliced through the Cyclops’s torso. Immediately, she was standing over a pile of dust.

Without another word, Cordelia whipped around and ran.

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PostSubject: Re: A Broken Oath (A Fanfiction)   Mon Oct 08, 2012 4:50 am

Wow....that.....was......AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!

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Cleo/Apollo            Terra/Fortuna
Stella/Demeter       Lilly/Thanatos
Dimitra/Athena       Katrina/Akeso
Nicole/Poseidon      Abby/Hypnos
Nathaly/Hades       Rebecca/Gaea          
Parker/Hermes/thief
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PostSubject: Re: A Broken Oath (A Fanfiction)   Tue Oct 09, 2012 8:32 pm

Thank you. Do you want Cleo or any other characters in it?

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PostSubject: Re: A Broken Oath (A Fanfiction)   Wed Oct 10, 2012 8:34 am

Could you put Stella in it?

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Cleo/Apollo            Terra/Fortuna
Stella/Demeter       Lilly/Thanatos
Dimitra/Athena       Katrina/Akeso
Nicole/Poseidon      Abby/Hypnos
Nathaly/Hades       Rebecca/Gaea          
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PostSubject: Re: A Broken Oath (A Fanfiction)   Sun Oct 14, 2012 5:36 am

Awesome story!
Maybe Luna could be in it? Laughing
She would have to frequently change personalities though

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PostSubject: Re: A Broken Oath (A Fanfiction)   Tue Oct 16, 2012 5:45 am

Chapter Two


“Are you alright?”

The sudden voice jolted Cordelia out of pure blackness. She blinking, seeing two hazy figures. They looked female. One had blonde hair and the other black hair that was streaked with multiple colors.

The blonde girl kneeled down. “Luna, do we need to feed her some ambrosia?” she asked the other girl.

Luna gave a jerk of her head in reply. “No, she’s just shocked. Can you walk?” she said, directing the question the Cordelia. “I’m Luna, as you probably guessed, and this is Cleo.”

Cordelia nodded slightly. “C - Cordelia,” she murmured. “And y - yes, I think I can walk.” She placed her hands on the ground, ignoring Cleo’s offered hand. She noticed that Luna had a necklace glowing pure white.

“Well, Cordelia,” Cleo began. She had no chance to continue. Luna’s necklace glowed silver and she tackled Cordelia. The daughter of Poseidon let out a frightened scream as Luna grabbed the necklace.

The necklace glowed yellow and suddenly, Luna let go of Cordelia. She was crying, making Cordelia stare. Cleo sighed, pulling Cordelia up. “Luna has multiple personalities,” she explained.

Cordelia nodded. “I see...” she murmured, as Cleo helped Luna up.

“Now, let’s go to Camp Half-Blood.” Cleo handed the sword to Cordelia. It grew back into its original form, making Cordelia gape before slipping it into her pocket. Then, Luna flagged a taxi.

“Let’s get in.”

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Skylar, Sarah, Robin, Estelle, Emerald, Veronica, Rebecca, Annabeth, Melanie, Diana, Luna, Sapphire, Naomi, Cassandra, Annalise


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PostSubject: Re: A Broken Oath (A Fanfiction)   Wed Oct 17, 2012 1:57 pm

Great job this is awesome. I think you did a really good job on bringing the characters to life.

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